Friday, July 9, 2004

#371...hammock therapy

 
 "S
o, about you - 

  i
like you so much better.
  ...your gentle man's soul -  
  (
that's good.)
 
your serenity 
 
your curiosity 
 
your observations 
  
your kind=ness 
  your devotion 
  and intelligence.
  your male=ness 
  and your simplicity...
              which is pretty complicated most of the time. 
 
  ...so
why am i tearing up...
  and smiling too, at the same time? 
                    -
you are all these things to me. 
  (because....you know that
  all of what you just said
  except for the male=ness
  is in you
  t
hat's what you respond to.)
  ah, so ...we appear kindred, eh?
  (
that's what you trust..is vastly importent..inside of you
  don't you think?
  Your words touched you.)
  you touch me -
             no small thing.
  (tell me you are not all those things...
  and you are also, my sweet, everything you just said about me...)
  but you - noticed. 
  (
I noticed me..movement - inside of me...)
  as strong today..as ever.. 
  (
yes.
  I moved and you teared - 
  both the same thing actually)

  ...and i smiled. 
  i feel fortunate to have met you 
  in light of all of the odds... 
  rare, 
  (I am as fortunate, in this - with you.)
genuine."
 

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow! {{  Flora  }} !!
So real, & so beautiful. I hope this is in your present.
V

Anonymous said...

Florie...this is soooo beautiful! I admire someone who can speak this kind of volumes with their words!

Anonymous said...

soft smile...

Anonymous said...

I like it.  It's very real & genuine.  -=)

Anonymous said...

oh, this is very beautiful and I so enjoyed it.......... there are many colors in your soul. judi

Anonymous said...

Flo potes!!  Amazing!
Is there any=thing else i should know?
OR that i think i think you---oh crud,
it's starting again^  lata babe

Anonymous said...

Wonderful Flo!  Applause!!!!
-Connie

Anonymous said...

Truly impressive. :-)

Anonymous said...

Ummm, beautiful. I detect some slac-speak? And is it pure jealousy to suspect ...

oh never mind! I got the trip to route 66 to remember forever!!

~ kayyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Anonymous said...

Have we met somewhere in another life?? It's very possible......Jon

Anonymous said...

You're amazing, my queen! This is beautiful!